5.31.2009

I'm so sorry.....


I saw you in the store.


You were clutching on to a shopping cart.


Why did you look so pale?




And then I started to stare.


I kept wondering the same question.


Why did you look so pale?




Did you have some sort of disease?


I was simply wondering.


Pity.




But then I found my answer.


And I wished I had never laid eyes on you.












4 Comments.:

Like it matters.... said...

:(
That is soooo sad.

sonny said...

ohh i like this very much.
cliff hanger.

aNNa nHi said...

((hope you don't find this offensive))

this reminds me a bit of twilight, when edward and bella first see each other.

bittersweet. yes?

you've got some serious talent. also, you're very kind. ;) thanks for the lovely comment.

Jocelyn said...

hey thanks for checkin out my blog! You've got some talent! I want to know how the story ends!