I saw you in the store.
You were clutching on to a shopping cart.
Why did you look so pale?
And then I started to stare.
I kept wondering the same question.
Why did you look so pale?
Did you have some sort of disease?
I was simply wondering.
Pity.
But then I found my answer.
And I wished I had never laid eyes on you.
4 Comments.:
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That is soooo sad.
ohh i like this very much.
cliff hanger.
((hope you don't find this offensive))
this reminds me a bit of twilight, when edward and bella first see each other.
bittersweet. yes?
you've got some serious talent. also, you're very kind. ;) thanks for the lovely comment.
hey thanks for checkin out my blog! You've got some talent! I want to know how the story ends!
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